IT HAPPENED DURING A MILITARY DRILL…
Up 1, 2, 3,
said he
Yeah up 1, 2, 3…
And the sound wobbled in my ears
A dizzy feeling settled around
And all the non-existent fears
Came haunting like a hound
But Up 1, 2, 3,
Said he
Yeah up 1, 2, 3…
The sky grew dark
The colors askew
Glimmered the stars
Through the hazy hues
But Up 1, 2, 3,
Said he
Yeah up 1, 2, 3…
The earth spun visibly fast
And all the world did follow
With a stroke of wind and blast
Into a pitch black hollow
But Up 1, 2, 3,
Said he
Yeah up 1, 2, 3…
And I slipped into an alien land
Without family, friends or foes
And yet through this void mode
I could hear well his echoes
Up 1, 2, 3,
Said he
Yeah up 1, 2, 3…
Numb and low in the head
Sweet sleep kissed me g’night
Half conscious and half dead
Darkness overcame the bright light
Yet Up 1, 2, 3,
Said he
Yeah up 1, 2, 3…
But suddenly broke this reverie
My eyes lit up and shone
And all the world seemed to be
Crowded with concern
Still Up 1, 2, 3,
Said he
Yeah up 1, 2, 3…
The silence broke away
A weak aura formed
I stood up on my feet
And once again he stormed
Up 1, 2, 3,
Said he
Yeah, up 1, 2, 3…
– Akanksha Gupta
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The poem is excellent and well-written with clarity! So keep it up.
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